Wednesday, May 12, 2010

The Eternal Question

Who reigns in the battle?
My heart wants to succeed.
Yet I cannot just ignore,
The fear my mind does heed.
Both my mind and my heart,
Wage war again, who'll win?
Once I reach that decision.
Weightlessness rules within.



11 comments:

  1. Good words here. Something to heed, I think.

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  2. I enjoy your words and the mood and point of them :)
    Short Poems

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  3. The battle alot face. Nice work.

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  4. Phew, the eternal battle goes on! Nicely stated!!

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  5. Thought-provoking... and, yes, certainly an eternal question.

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  6. Well crafted and may neither win in the end.

    -Tim

    http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/05/adepta-sororitas.html

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  7. The struggle between heart and mind can feel like a war.

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  8. I'm with Tim - hope they work it out. Well said!

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  9. This was great. Honestly, I love rhyming poetry, it makes me read it slower, savoring the meter, the words. Great job.

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  10. yes, i like this that you speak of... the constant.... and then comes the peace...

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