Wednesday, May 12, 2010

The Eternal Question

Who reigns in the battle?
My heart wants to succeed.
Yet I cannot just ignore,
The fear my mind does heed.
Both my mind and my heart,
Wage war again, who'll win?
Once I reach that decision.
Weightlessness rules within.



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10 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczMay 12, 2010 at 10:52 PM

    Good words here. Something to heed, I think.

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  2. M. RekaMay 13, 2010 at 1:35 AM

    I enjoy your words and the mood and point of them :)
    Short Poems

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  3. AngelMay 13, 2010 at 1:43 AM

    The battle alot face. Nice work.

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  4. Andy SewinaMay 13, 2010 at 1:58 AM

    Phew, the eternal battle goes on! Nicely stated!!

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  5. AnonymousMay 13, 2010 at 4:04 AM

    Thought-provoking... and, yes, certainly an eternal question.

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  6. Timothy P. RempMay 13, 2010 at 8:30 PM

    Well crafted and may neither win in the end.

    -Tim

    http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/05/adepta-sororitas.html

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  7. SandyCarlsonMay 16, 2010 at 7:13 AM

    The struggle between heart and mind can feel like a war.

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  8. Dee MartinMay 16, 2010 at 7:45 AM

    I'm with Tim - hope they work it out. Well said!

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  9. Business IQMay 17, 2010 at 8:23 AM

    This was great. Honestly, I love rhyming poetry, it makes me read it slower, savoring the meter, the words. Great job.

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  10. AnonymousMay 18, 2010 at 12:45 AM

    yes, i like this that you speak of... the constant.... and then comes the peace...

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